Saturday, January 2, 2010

"Starstruck"

OMG IT'S A STORY
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Written: 1/02/10
Characters: Taylor and Josh, both 15
Setting: a school dance
Perspective: third person POV
Song used: Starstruck by Lady Gaga (2:48 - 3:10)

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“Baby now that we’re alone got a request, can you make me #1 on your playlist…”

Taylor pressed closer to Josh. The way he moved his body would have distracted Josh’s attention were it not for his captivating hazel eyes being locked with Josh’s green ones.

“Got your dirty headphones with the left side on…”


Taylor reached up with his left hand and motioned as if he had a pair of DJ headphones on, with the upbeat, sliding a little closer to Josh.

“Scratch it back and forth back and forth uh-huh…”

Josh reached his arms around Taylor scratching records on an imaginary turntable. He pulled back his hands on the downbeat.

“Put your hands on my waist pull the fader, switch it back with original flavor…”


Taylor grabbed Josh’s hands and slid them onto his waist. He moved his hands up behind his head, and swayed his hips flirtatiously to the rhythm. Josh moved his hands to take Taylor’s. The younger boy looked at him with a coquettish smile. Leaning in quickly, he whispered with the lyrics “baby, could you blow my heart up?” He kissed Josh on the cheek and stepped back, releasing the other boy’s hands. He winked and turned back as he left the dance floor.

Josh just looked down and the floor and laughed to himself. That had been the hottest, most amazing three minutes and ten seconds of his life, and he’d nearly forgotten it had just been a silly dare by one of Taylor’s friends.

Or had it been?

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First time to actually use certain pieces of a song in the writing itself. The whole song actually does play out in my mind, but I completely suck at writing dance sort of things, so this was literally the best part. ._.
yeah, anyway I'm embarrassed this is up here. Just glad nobody who really likes Gaga reads this. I think. xD

2 comments:

  1. You aren't on msn right now so I'm telling you here. :3
    this was cute. :D hehe.
    I think you should show him.

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  2. haha, thanks!
    If I feel exceptionally bold one night, I'll definitely send it to him. :P

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